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Samson & Friends
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 1:35 am     Reply with quote
Hi, this is supposed to be an actress, can you work out who it is?

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The hair never works, maybe it's because my drawing pen isn't pressure sensitive?
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 1:41 am     Reply with quote
wow, the face looks great! beautiful!

but, but, but, the shoulder looks to big and high. and yes hair needs more line work.

those eyes are awesome too.

Yet can't figure who it is!

later
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 1:59 am     Reply with quote
YES YES YES!!! The Face and skin is shaded masterfully! The eyes are quite beautiful as well, Me too says fix the sholder and maybe smooth the hair out. (WHO IS IT??)

Ian

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 2:30 am     Reply with quote
Julianne Moore
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 2:41 am     Reply with quote
Nose needs a little bit of work...Add some slightly deeper shadow to it, instead of the soft line you have going...(Everyone else has mentioned everything else) -- But I really like the job you did on her eyes/mouth and the general rest of her face...Good work!

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 2:56 am     Reply with quote
the face looks great, it could use a little more value however. now the hair, it looks tangled, this may have come from the pre sketching. i would suggest making it looks more smooth/straight. other than that excellent portrait.

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 3:46 am     Reply with quote
great job...i agree the face could use a bit more contrast and maybe smooth the lines of the hair a bit. and i'm pretty sure it's heather graham...do i get a prize?
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 3:51 am     Reply with quote
Well, the file name is Jul1.jpg, so hehe. Wonder who, heck, I still don't know. Looks good, hair looks weird though. And about that shoulder, I think it looks fine (to me), it seems to be the style of her dress. Big fuffy shoulder-pad-thing. Hehe..

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 3:53 am     Reply with quote
Talent man, thats awesome.
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 4:25 am     Reply with quote
humm .. jodie foster ?
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 5:11 am     Reply with quote
I like the colours used here... but damned if I can tell what celebrity it is.

Anyway, I think the shoulder is meant to be a bit "lifted"... not a puffy sleeve, but rather that she is posed so that the shoulder is slightly higher (maybe based on a sitting position where the arm rests on the knee or something?) I think it looks good

Only small complaint I have is the hair... using individual strands like that can work, but then you need to show that some strands are outside of the main "bulk" of the hair, giving it a less flat look. And you need some highlights to give the hair life (as well as some shadows - now, it looks like the hair is more like a wool hat, without any real depth to it - you need to accentuate the individual locks more, and the strands a little bit less.) Am I making any sense?

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 5:24 am     Reply with quote
i think Enayla think of something like this
http://www.gameart.com/tutorials/index.asp?tutorial=hair2 <-- her own tutorial at gameart

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 5:32 am     Reply with quote
*laugh* Adezj! I was avoiding posting that so it wouldn't seem like a shameless plug!

Guess it's different when someone else does it, though.

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 6:51 am     Reply with quote
I think it looks a bit like nicole kidman
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 7:39 am     Reply with quote
Looks wonderful. But the hair seems to have a lot less detail than the rest. And it also looks a bit flat in some places.
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 9:18 am     Reply with quote
Peg Bundy?


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PostPosted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 10:22 am     Reply with quote
Strikes me as Ms. Kidman!
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 10:36 am     Reply with quote
I definitely agree on the Julianne Moore vote.

Soften up that hair a bit and you'll have yourself a lovely portrait. ^_^

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 3:38 pm     Reply with quote
I think it's suppose to be Julianne Moore, but where the features haven't been caried over correctly it gives the impression of Jody Foster and Heather Graham. I only lean towards Julianne the most because of the flaming red hair. The face needs to lose the 'overly-cuteness' aspect that makes it look like graham and foster (if you're going for moore). Moore has more of a beautiful face than the other two who are more 'cute'.

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 3:49 pm     Reply with quote
Heather Graham?
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 8:58 pm     Reply with quote
Golly gosh, I didn't think I'd get so many replies. Thanks for the crits guys, I might do some more work on this image yet, by fixing the shoulder and using that handy hair tutorial that Enayla did (thanks for the link AdezJ).

And yes, it was supposed to be Julianne Moore! I guess I'll have to try harder at getting a likeness next time since only three people got it. Looking back, it does kind of look like Heather Graham and Nicole Kidman.
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 10:15 pm     Reply with quote
I Like, but hair has a *sort of* yarn look to it. Kind of appears as *another* layer, when it might flow better if blended. Cool Man, Cool
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 14, 2001 9:11 am     Reply with quote
.....itīs Helen Hunt definetly

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 14, 2001 4:15 pm     Reply with quote
its definitely stone cold steve austin
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 14, 2001 6:32 pm     Reply with quote
right on Kanabis! i place all my bets with kanabis.
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 14, 2001 7:37 pm     Reply with quote
Cool pic. face is good. shoulder weird. hair needs larger clusters of hair and darker undershading. Work on it...

what I really wanted to do was get in touch with Kanabis !!!!

you there? I'm from QLD too. Brisbane in fact. do you have icq?? I want to get in touch with you. My icq is in my user details.

so get in touch.. plz

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