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odashi
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2001 5:03 pm     Reply with quote
havent posted anything good in a while, this was inspired by me and isrics drawing game, ( http://www.sijun.com/dhabih/ubb/Forum5/HTML/000195.html ) the rock lifting creature thing, anyway here it is. please crit, especialy the coloring i need the most help with coloring my pics.

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fwiffo
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2001 5:31 pm     Reply with quote
the drawing looks good. reminds me of the rat monsters from bone.

the coloring seems good in general. you might want to consider using the values more to convey depth - ie, the highlight on the head seems to end rather abruptly and the continuing value seems to join the head too closely into the front left leg (and back leg). overall you might want to think more about using value or color to connote depth to make it less flat.

the tree highlights are interesting. they currently seem to be very close to one of the dark midtones you use for the creature. interesting choice, but possibly too dark considering the creature's highlight? i dunno.

actually, maybe the thing that's bugging me is that the black silhouette starts in the foreground and on the left and seems to continue onto the into the middle/background? have you tried varying the highlight colors on the trees (corresponding with the depth) maybe? that might help. or it might be me chasing shadows.
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Isric
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 13, 2001 7:34 am     Reply with quote
K,this is awsome. I realy really like this one. The cloud color choice is perfect, and the blue you chose for the mountains is perfect (although it helps for us, living an hour from the canadian Rockies).
The colors on the beast are realy cool too, over all your palette choice is improving.
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AdezJ
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 13, 2001 3:04 pm     Reply with quote
hehe cool wich world is this?

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Isric
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 13, 2001 10:02 pm     Reply with quote
sorry in advance chris.....I just had no choice


really

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A.Buttle
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 13, 2001 11:46 pm     Reply with quote
I see Bob Ross in your mountains there, Isric...

And now we paint some happy little trees. There, that's great...

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El Caseron
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 14, 2001 12:27 am     Reply with quote
cute

lightning could be better though maybe coloured lightsource?

stored!
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Giant Hamster
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 14, 2001 12:34 am     Reply with quote
oooooh a giant Louse!!!!! or mite!!!!!!!!! Louse-Mite!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <----lots of Exlamation points. shut up, they still love you.

i like this, i really do, i even like how its very simple, cause that adds a lot too it. if it was too detailed it would actually look worse.

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odashi
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 14, 2001 10:35 pm     Reply with quote
hehe, cool i like it matt
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Isric
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 14, 2001 11:55 pm     Reply with quote
heh, thanks chris, it's meant to be just a few seconds after yours. Like after a twig snaps or sumthin.
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