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S4Sb
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 26, 2001 9:15 am     Reply with quote
Wasn't very good.

Please coment especially on colours and lightning, cause that is where I need LOTS of help.



Got fed up with the background and wanted to get this one finished... so no detail in this tomb.

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 26, 2001 9:20 am     Reply with quote
I think maybe his nose should be in shadows too, but I am not too good shading

About colours, the thing I don't like is that blue...but that's just personal taste, I hate that kind of blue.

A proud genius I must say...from old England maybe? (just kidding my English friends)
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 26, 2001 9:52 am     Reply with quote
He seems very solid, not very ethereal. Whattabout losing some opacity. It would be nice to suggest dust in the air as well, dunno how you'd do that though.

kinda marshmallowy, I still like it though

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 26, 2001 10:36 am     Reply with quote
Thanks for the comments!

Well, I tried to change what I can... but am not very convinced about it.



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PostPosted: Sat Jan 27, 2001 4:51 pm     Reply with quote
hmmm, i don't th you "rubbed him the right way" go a bit easier on the highlights, my eyes are hurting

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 27, 2001 4:54 pm     Reply with quote
nice picture

if you want to have a gaseous look on the genie you could make the edges transparent and the mid section less transparent.
In the middle there would be more gas molecules and they would absorb more light than on the borders of the genie..

just my 0.0002342 cents
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