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Member # Joined: 13 Jan 2001 Posts: 803 Location: near Hamburg (Germany) | Registered: Mar 2000
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Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2001 9:15 am |
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Wasn't very good.
Please coment especially on colours and lightning, cause that is where I need LOTS of help.
Got fed up with the background and wanted to get this one finished... so no detail in this tomb.
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Member # Joined: 03 Dec 2000 Posts: 656 Location: Madrid, Spain
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Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2001 9:20 am |
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I think maybe his nose should be in shadows too, but I am not too good shading
About colours, the thing I don't like is that blue...but that's just personal taste, I hate that kind of blue.
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Member # Joined: 27 May 2000 Posts: 463 Location: scotland
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Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2001 9:52 am |
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He seems very solid, not very ethereal. Whattabout losing some opacity. It would be nice to suggest dust in the air as well, dunno how you'd do that though.
kinda marshmallowy, I still like it though
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Member # Joined: 13 Jan 2001 Posts: 803 Location: near Hamburg (Germany) | Registered: Mar 2000
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Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2001 10:36 am |
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Thanks for the comments!
Well, I tried to change what I can... but am not very convinced about it.
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Member # Joined: 21 May 2000 Posts: 945 Location: Long Island, NY
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Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2001 4:51 pm |
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hmmm, i don't th you "rubbed him the right way" go a bit easier on the highlights, my eyes are hurting
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Member # Joined: 25 Mar 2000 Posts: 2086 Location: Austria
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Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2001 4:54 pm |
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nice picture
if you want to have a gaseous look on the genie you could make the edges transparent and the mid section less transparent.
In the middle there would be more gas molecules and they would absorb more light than on the borders of the genie..
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