[Visigoth]

I posted this in Work in Progress because I'm planning on re-doing it in Photoshop...Anyone have any suggestions/comments for it as I start re-doing it? Enjoy!



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Your car is a fiberglass penis extension.

[Dthind]

So far I like. Cant wait to see a full color version.

Question - Is she wearing a mask, and if she is, have you thought about not having the mask worn. For some odd reason, (IMHO) it would look really cool if she was not wearing the mask but rather holding it (again IMHO).

[Lukias]

Nice work Visigoth!.
Very clean, lovely shading, really nice subtle blends.
Nice breasts.....realistic I mean.

[Visigoth]

Dthind -- LOL -- Yeah actually...She originally had a face, but I decided to remove it to make her a little more menacing. I gave her a faceless mask instead; If you cannot see your enemies eyes, you don't know what they're thinking. Some suggestions I had gotten from other people, was she was "too pretty" to be a demon/etc, so I decided to remove the face; Since Photoshop has ever-wonderful layers, I think I'll probably do two versions of it.

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Your car is a fiberglass penis extension.

[Waldo]

Overall this looks great and I look forward to seeing it finished. Are you going to do it in your usual style? Other than what you pointed out in your WIP post, one area where I kind of got lost was the armament and how it tied into her shoulder. Maybe the reflections need to refined? Also the top of her hand. Same thing with the reflections if that's what those lines are. Also maybe gradating the lighting on the wings a bit more from dark to light, top to bottom.

Anyway, my .02. Ignore me if you wish! Good luck

[Visigoth]

No dude, great suggestions;
Yeah I had noticed the problem with her right shoulder-pauldron and the way the reflections/highlights go on it -- The design of the piece was altered slightly, but unfortunately no amount of erasing could take care of the line that was there, so I attempted to correct the mistake by trying to duplicate the chrome look over the same place.
Regarding the reflections on the gauntlets; I ran into the exact same problem there. I had a very limited amount of reference to go on, and since I've never drawn chrome steel before it was a bit of an adventure. :P Thanks for the suggestions!

Regarding the style I'm going to do it in...I don't know...I haven't decided yet. I want to go more for realistic shading/etc, but I'll see what comes about.

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Your car is a fiberglass penis extension.

[Akolyte]

Hey, you cheated! Damn mask... I think she looks cool, just her wings need some harder edges and brutality added in.

[Krazy]

hey man your nipple place ment is superb excelent work