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CapnPyro
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 Posted: Sun Feb 11, 2001 12:09 am |
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I know it's not exactly digital art, hope you guys don't mind. It's for my portfolio, so any critiques on how to make it better, let me know
Persian Assassin
Here's the script I made up for it.
Thanks,
-Cap
[Edit: UBB Code owns me]
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[This message has been edited by CapnPyro (edited February 11, 2001).] |
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TheMilkMan
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| Posted: Sun Feb 11, 2001 12:20 am |
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| Looks good so far..very campbell look to the character...you must be a fan huh? |
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SporQ
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| Posted: Sun Feb 11, 2001 1:01 am |
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i agree, i can see the campbell influence, i like it a lot. the perspective on the buildings in panel 1 are is all over the place. it looks like there are 3 or 4 horizon lines... i would suggest fixing those.
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CapnPyro
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| Posted: Sun Feb 11, 2001 1:08 am |
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Yup, Campbell fan, guilty.
Sporq, shit! It would probably help if my 2 vanishing points are on the same horizontal line lol.. that's TOTALLY not straight.. shiat! I (obviously) eyeballed it. I'm uhh.. gonna fix that.. later. Thanks for pointing that out. |
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Chapel
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| Posted: Sun Feb 11, 2001 9:41 am |
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| Hey your figure drawing is really improving. That last panel looks great. |
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CapnPyro
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| Posted: Sun Feb 11, 2001 7:31 pm |
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Thanks Chap, I'm tryin 
Im fixing some things wrong with it, hopefully ill upload it later |
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