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kurisu
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 24, 2000 9:46 am     Reply with quote
Allakazzoo
Allakazzam
you say 'tomato'
& I say 'Shazzam!'

To write them can uplift
can bring out your heart
so why not post yours here
share with us as a start

Don't worry about content
nor whether it rhymes
Should come from within you
the good and bad times.

"Storm of emotion
After a season of drought
conscience parts the clouds"

Ha! This is fun
I just made that up
So if you're inclined
Let's get going - wussup?!

Can be funny or sad
Can be heavy or be light
Can be mad or just glad
Can be fresh or be trite

...Or quote something nice
from your present or past
something insightful
that's momentary or can last...

Enjoy it though!

-kurisu (chris)
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Spitfire
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 24, 2000 10:50 am     Reply with quote
Not by me, but still worth mentioning :

"A lean eye provoking me, I steel myself to meet my demise 'cause there's murder ablaze in your eyes. I steel myself to meet your device now there's surrender ablaze in your eyes.

Im giving you something you can feel, so that you'll know this love is real.

There is blood between us, i drink it well. The opposition fell, determination. The iridescence of my tenacity has conquered me, retaliation. Retaliation, I covet you, yeah.

Im a diamond, i did not have a name. Yes im a diamond, this is my name, now. It's a contraption engineered to lure me, i fall so lovingly into your arms. Your burning eyes have burnt my will, a precious thrill that chained me. Lost and beyond. I turn deranged, how i changed into confusion.

Anaesthetic, drink up my tears. Anaesthetic, sedate my fears. Sedate my fears.

Now im all that i can be. You got me thinking in horizons, you reinvested me, now im all that i can be. Now im all that i can be."

"Covet" by facedown.

/Spitfire



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They're clawing at the sky,
they're gonna pull it down.
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 24, 2000 11:45 am     Reply with quote
think i could pull it off by just quoting some band?

ain't no poet myself.



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the owls damn sure aren't what they seem.
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ozmosisq3
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 24, 2000 2:54 pm     Reply with quote
It is yellow
But quite mellow
I used to get in speech
but not to breech
Yes, I do love this paper mass
For it is my speech class pass.

Don't ask.... I did use a pass do get into speech class today though.

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PostPosted: Fri Mar 24, 2000 3:20 pm     Reply with quote
Mmmm i poem i wrote very early this year, one of my beginning ones... )


No Control


As I stand in the shadows
Dripping from the loss of love
I see you standing there
With an old Bouquet

Life use to be so easy
Not a thing could stop me
From wanting to be with you

But you changed your ways
Slowly pushed me away
Not a thing could stop me
Except for you…

Flowers couldn’t coerce you
Neither could my heart
But deep inside
I know you need me

If I could control
When you hated me
We would be in a different position
Still together, within ourselves

But it didn’t go that way
We are apart
Our hearts no longer tied
But my love, is no longer lost

Written: January 10th 2000


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Adamantine
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 26, 2000 2:01 pm     Reply with quote
Suckasspoem #1 : For Angie

no im not mad at you just at what you said
since the meaning of it changes with every word

love turns to hate
hate to friendship
friendship to love

no i don't what love is
since what we had wasn't
just very close
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Adamantine
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 26, 2000 2:14 pm     Reply with quote
--tears--
it's by a wonderfull girl i meet online...
she calls herself a.lone.., thereof this poem..

they dribble down my face
trying to find a new home
for my eyes have no more use for them
but only to release the salty water
the water that is stored for moments like this
when nothing matters
i am lost
and confused
and crying
so stay away
you do not understand
or maybe u just don't care
doesnt matter
they both tell me the same thing
i am alone
forever
do not come any closer
i might rub off my pain
on u
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 26, 2000 2:18 pm     Reply with quote
yes faust everyone is poethic to some
degree...you just need inspiration.....
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Spitfire
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 27, 2000 1:36 am     Reply with quote
Or a baseballbat in your face...

/Spitfire



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They're clawing at the sky,
they're gonna pull it down.
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Dhabih
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 27, 2000 1:55 am     Reply with quote

I should not be here
This isn't the time
I must be packing....
...and not making a rhyme.



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kurisu
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 27, 2000 5:06 am     Reply with quote
Cool stuff poops! I mean peeps!

As I drift off to that pillow place of head meets bedframe, I murmur but a few verbal flatulence...

I'm tired!
I'm tired!
I'm going to bed!
Post after posting
has gone to my head!

little tiny man
walking in his pajamas
heavy dreams abound

kurisu's over and out
like flying sauerkraut

-k
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 27, 2000 5:52 am     Reply with quote
kurisu, kurisu, you weird little fella
your words hang over us like an umbrella
even though the sun goes to hide
you're still awake, up and with pride
but here in holland, that rainy place
everything moves at a much slower pace
its just a little past noon here so go, go go
and i will, i promise, take over the show.

/Spitfire
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 27, 2000 3:01 pm     Reply with quote
Two poems about Timbuktu:

By a Yale Graduate:
"Slowly through the desert sands, treked a lonely caravan. Men on camels two by two. Destination. Timbuktu."

By a Redneck from Wyoming:
"Me and Tim a huntin went. Met three whores in a popup tent. They was three and we was two. So I bucked one and TimBuckedTwo.
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Ned
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 27, 2000 7:01 pm     Reply with quote
Mary had a little lamb,
the Doctors were astounded.
Everywhere she went
Gynaecologists surrounded.

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Te audire no possum. Musa sapientum fixa est in aure
(I can't hear you. I have a banana in my ear.)
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 27, 2000 11:23 pm     Reply with quote



-k
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 28, 2000 6:15 am     Reply with quote
Kurisu, Kurisu,
he's witty and funny.
Kurisu Kurisu,
His words flow like hunny.

'Till deep in the night
he stays up and posts
his art and his poems
he likes that the most(s)

Kurisu, Kurisu,
he's witty and funny.
Kurisu Kurisu,
His words flow like hunny.

So come on dear people,
join us and write!
In just a few days
It'll be a wonderful sight

Poems and stories,
of bums and of love,
of quality tablets
and Him From Above.

So join us now people,
join us and write!
With everyone rhyming
we'll make this board bright.

*dead* 3V!L h@x0r : b000! p03tRy iZ f0r w!mPz! kUr!sU @nD sP!tF!r3 sUx0rZ! w00t!!!

/Spitfire out.

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Jess
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 28, 2000 8:38 am     Reply with quote
psycho poetry is my specialty... this isn't my best one... but it's the only one I have uploaded... it doesn't usually play right... when it's done loading, right click on the movie and click 'Play' and it should play just fine. I guess there's still some bugs I need to fix. Anyway, here it is:

erase me


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PostPosted: Tue Mar 28, 2000 9:10 am     Reply with quote
Jess : that one rox I allready saw it when i checked your site but i gave it another shot.

/Spitfire
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 28, 2000 1:30 pm     Reply with quote
AH FUCK FUCK FUCK!!!
I FUCKING HATE YOU!!
kk, i type this long meaningfull shit!
and guess what!
i type wrong password!
poof!
bang!
boom!
goon!
oh yeah great world we're living in!
YEAH YES HUN HARDER YEAH BABY!!
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 28, 2000 1:46 pm     Reply with quote

Thanks Spitfire

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PostPosted: Wed Mar 29, 2000 12:30 am     Reply with quote
/me jumps on top of adamantine, gives him a shot of tranq and whips him in a straightjacket

Easy now boy... easy. You can share your padded room with me. There's 4 walls to smash into and i only use one.

Jess : Got more? /me likes

/Spitfire mumbles incoherently
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 29, 2000 6:00 am     Reply with quote
lol!

I'm doing an expirement: Trying to see how a cave dweller behaves with sleep deprivation and not enough food...

I'm falling azzzleep
Head droppin' on dowwwwn
I can't zeem to manage
to zmile or to frowwwwn

Eyelidzzzz are drippin'
right over my eyezzzz
they're drownin' my conscienzzze
with big mackz 'n friezzz

Oh man am I hungryyyy
zome food would be nizzzze
if I could only just moooove
feel I'm trapped under izzze

There'zzz zome real cool poemzzz
in thiz here'n threadd
spent long momentzzz laughin'
almozt laughed into beddd

But that'zzz for the birdzz
or maybe the sheeppp
I think I had betterrr
get myzelf backk to zleeepppp...

-k (rash)
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Affected
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 29, 2000 6:16 am     Reply with quote
Well, I just have to ask.. Ned, are you sure that's what your sig means? I'm rather sure 'musa sapientum' does NOT mean 'banana'....
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 29, 2000 6:25 am     Reply with quote
Kurisu you rule!

That one was brilliant...

And yes, sapientum refers to intelligence & stuff.. not fruit I've never been good at latin though...

*dead* EV!L h@x0r : p@t3r 3t m@t3r !N cUb!cUl0 d0rM3nT, s3d pu3ll@3 !n h0rtUs @mbUl@nT

*dead* L33t h@x0r : ShUt Up G33k d0rK!!!!

/Spitfire nonnulum contentus est.

/Spitfire
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 29, 2000 6:35 am     Reply with quote
Ooh, that sounds frigteningly familiar.. What was your latin book's name?

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We do not have freedom. We have rules and oppression and where the oppression is less visible we believe to have found freedom.

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PostPosted: Wed Mar 29, 2000 9:04 am     Reply with quote
Roses are red,
violets are blue,
I'm a schizophrenic,
and so am I.


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On receiving an interrupt,
decrement the counter to zero.
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 29, 2000 9:51 am     Reply with quote
Affected : my book was (not in school anymore, thank god) called "Via Nova" but since it was written by 4 dutch people i doubt you ever saw it...most books use the same excersizes and writings anyhow.

/Spitfire

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PostPosted: Fri Mar 31, 2000 6:53 am     Reply with quote
sonicly were in control,
were the dimond in your soul,
images come thick and fast,
from the future from the past.

(leftfeild - original)

just thought it was fitting

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PostPosted: Fri Mar 31, 2000 8:22 am     Reply with quote
"Day Dreamer"

it's unpredictable,
the things that come into sight,
Like the memories of a hot and sweaty night.
Day dreamer never whispers a thought to a soul
Of the Gods that keep her safe.
Or the painful aching sobs
that keep her awake.
Visions and reveries entrap her,
like a thick twilight fog.
Enrapturing her heart,
keeping her torn.
Long fully scorn,
She will always be torn.
Lost in her reveries,
she hates to awaken
to the brash realities
that come from a dream.

.. April/May 1999 ..
. Jessica R. Tobine .


PS
Phil, nice work
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 31, 2000 11:46 am     Reply with quote
Ok.. this is my first poem (I think). Kinda sappy, but .. it's all I could think of.

"Break Up"

My mind is in shambles
my vision a blur.
I can't seem to focus
without picturing her.

She says I'm infatuated
and I should let go.
I think otherwise
but we'll never know.

This pain in my heart
it hurts so much.
It aches to reach out
and feel her touch.

I wish we could go back
to the way things were.
But for now I'll accept "just friends"
to be next to her.

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-Chapel
Brian Reber
http://www.geocities.com/chapel_t9/

[This message has been edited by Chapel (edited April 01, 2000).]
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