View previous topic :: View next topic |
Author |
Topic : "s a g e - critic if you wish ~.^" |
Pat member
Member # Joined: 06 Feb 2001 Posts: 947 Location: San Antonio
|
Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2001 1:55 pm |
|
 |
I'd like the pic w/o the lighting effect applied over it. The effect over-exposes your mark-making details, which is what makes portraits like these intimate.
In the future you might want to post a slightly larger version of your work as well, so we can crit it a little more.
-Pat |
|
Back to top |
|
-Tepox- member
Member # Joined: 25 Mar 2001 Posts: 352 Location: Finland
|
Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2001 2:37 pm |
|
 |
Hi Jenas! well, first what comes my mind; Paperdoll placed near to wall in dark room and someone is lighting it with flashlight. Portrait itself is very nice. You just should give proper lighting to your charachter to give some 3D to it. |
|
Back to top |
|
JenasLotus junior member
Member # Joined: 07 Aug 2001 Posts: 9 Location: NYC
|
Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2001 4:14 pm |
|
 |
hi there I wish I knew how to do all these things I do have it without lighting I think I will add it too ( 0=
thank you! |
|
Back to top |
|
JenasLotus junior member
Member # Joined: 07 Aug 2001 Posts: 9 Location: NYC
|
Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2001 11:27 pm |
|
 |
Link is below
s a g e |
|
Back to top |
|
elam member
Member # Joined: 27 Sep 2000 Posts: 456 Location: Motown
|
Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2001 11:47 pm |
|
 |
]
[ August 08, 2001: Message edited by: elam ] |
|
Back to top |
|
|