[J. leavitt]

A long running D&D character I finally sat down and drew.
I'm a HS student, entering senior year, looking to go into concept art.. And I'd just like comments and criticism on the picture. Mostly "is this good portfolio work?"

DnaError- Natural Nuerotic

[dr . bang]

You've just made FOUR threads!

[jr]

um, it would be much more helpful if you put all four pictures in one thread. this guy has a brian williams (nbc news) lop sided face, also there seems to be too much of a thrust in the middle part of his body, usually only comic book females do that, or poorly drawn rob liefeld stuff.
on the brighter side, you have good imagination, keep that up and work on the technical aspect of it. good luck!