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pierre
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Hello,
I got temporarily tired of doing technical illustrations in school and doodled around and came up with this.
comments and crits are welcome.
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Ben Barker
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| Posted: Tue Oct 16, 2001 9:06 pm |
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Cool. The big, burly geometry and repeating features reminds me of Quake 2. My only crit is that the light doesn't seem harsh enough for space. Although maybe movies have spoiled me on the way space looks, since I've never been there  |
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Freddio
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| Posted: Tue Oct 16, 2001 10:43 pm |
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Hey welcome back Pierre.. Long time no see 
Looking good, A little different from your usual stuff.. very nice indeed.. |
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digiGen
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| Posted: Wed Oct 17, 2001 10:57 am |
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Awesome. It looks rendered.
My only crit is that the materials appear too soft/organic. But maybe that was what you were going for... |
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KOryH
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| Posted: Wed Oct 17, 2001 2:53 pm |
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I would like to say that it was good but i can't...
It's excellent! I love your control of shapes and edges. The colors come together nicely as well. Your technical side is showing. Very clean.
The only thing is that you could have your glows bloom or bleed a little bit.
Keep Kickin Ass, |
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pierre
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| Posted: Fri Oct 19, 2001 12:37 pm |
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Just a small change.
I thought it could be more interesting if the inside was more visible, no?
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Vgta
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| Posted: Fri Oct 19, 2001 12:40 pm |
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OH hell yeah 
It looked good before now it looks even better.
LOL, the blue light reminds me of the countless Brazil renderings I have seen..heheh.
Great work man. |
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Quasar
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| Posted: Fri Oct 19, 2001 2:14 pm |
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| Looks great man!! |
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Joachim
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| Posted: Fri Oct 19, 2001 3:02 pm |
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Hey pierre,
nice to see your name back. THough I haven't been much active myself.
Nice illustration. I think the feeling is great. And, also you've captured the light very well. What I miss, is a bit of original color from the object itself. Since you originally shaded it very brown monochromic, and later addad blue light from within, you feel that the only color that is there if from the color of the lightsource. Which makes it seem a bit monochromic and "unrealistic". And some more technical details that have colors and shape ,that seem believable ofcourse, and it would look alot better. |
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Shiro_tengu
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| Posted: Fri Oct 19, 2001 3:11 pm |
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I love them both. Great work.
I think Homer Simpson summed it up best when he said;
"Light turns on! Light turns off! Light turns on! Light turns off!"
or is it
"Browser scrolls up! Browser scrolls down....
ok I need a coffee
[ October 19, 2001: Message edited by: Shiro_tengu ] |
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MrLuisDiaz
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| Posted: Sat Oct 20, 2001 2:44 pm |
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| Nice lighting! |
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