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Gothic Gerbil member
Member # Joined: 10 Jul 2000 Posts: 237 Location: Ooltewah, Tennessee, USA
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Posted: Tue Nov 20, 2001 1:23 pm |
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Oooh pretty colours! I like it, but personally I think the sketchiness of it gives it more of a mmmm rushed? feel. Grr sorry can't find the words I need. Ok, how about this, I think if you're trying to get away from the polished airbrushed look then you should give the strokes a reason for being there. Tra la! I think that is close enough at least to what I was wanting to say. Sorry, babbling. Are those wings attached to her head? She doesn't try to fly with them does she? |
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pro-phet member
Member # Joined: 13 Nov 2001 Posts: 130 Location: Kandel,Germany
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Posted: Tue Nov 20, 2001 1:42 pm |
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3 things that hold me back from looking on it for hours.
1. le left nosewing
2. the lips (dunno why. perhaps too small in width??)
3. the arm (starst big and gets small to soon i think. looks strange to me.)
rest is fine. like it alot  |
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TatianaStarchevsky junior member
Member # Joined: 31 Jul 2001 Posts: 6
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Posted: Wed Nov 21, 2001 12:42 am |
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This was an attempt to step away from the polished airbrush look. It's a small step, but I'm happy with it anyways.
If the image won't show, go
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[ November 20, 2001: Message edited by: TatianaStarchevsky ] |
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pro-phet member
Member # Joined: 13 Nov 2001 Posts: 130 Location: Kandel,Germany
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Posted: Wed Nov 21, 2001 12:54 am |
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can't find the picture  |
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ZeeroX junior member
Member # Joined: 14 Nov 2001 Posts: 38 Location: Canada
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Posted: Wed Nov 21, 2001 4:10 pm |
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wow, shes hot. |
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Highfive member
Member # Joined: 08 Oct 2001 Posts: 640 Location: Brisbane, AU
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Posted: Wed Nov 21, 2001 6:23 pm |
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It's beautiful. Is this a self-portrait?
*everyone groans*
Great colour work! The multiple colours in the eyes is very appealing. A nice choice of background, too.
I don't quite know how coloured streaks of hair look but I think they look too blurred in this pic. If you could see their individual strands a little better, I think they'd look more like the rest of her hair.
You've simply got to stick this onEbonykeep, if you haven't already: |
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Tatiana junior member
Member # Joined: 31 Jul 2001 Posts: 33
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Posted: Wed Nov 21, 2001 7:37 pm |
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Thanks everyone, I've fixed some of the things. The wings are staying where they are though...
And Highfive, I've registered at ebony keep, thanks. I think someone asked me if my last fantasy girl was a self-portrait, too. |
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