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stan522
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 01, 2002 8:25 am     Reply with quote
long time no post, really need some crits for this one


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KOryH
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 01, 2002 1:09 pm     Reply with quote
Looking good. i likr the composition and the pose alot.
I would fix the BG. Go ahead and keep it simple but try to avoid the glowing edges effect when painting around the character.
Try some cools in the cast shadows as well.
Other than that, good job
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 01, 2002 6:26 pm     Reply with quote
I personally think that the glowing edges work, but the picture doesn't really show that he's a climber other than the fact that one leg is higher than the other.

The only thing I would fix about it is the left arm. It's a bit too long in the upper area. The elbow itself comes a little above the waist in most people, usually near the bottom of the ribcage. Although there are some people who have arms like that. Just a thought.
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 01, 2002 7:21 pm     Reply with quote
thanks for the comments, i didnt really intend him to be a climber... just a study in anatomy... i'll post an update to this soon
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