[greko]

hey all, this is the first time I've posted here. This is my final project in my soph. CG class, and it's worth 30% of my grade, so be as brutal as you please, cus' this has to be pimp.

ok here it is:


this is the first time I've tryed this style. I'm used to comic book coloring, and cel shading. The face and the upper arm are the most complete.

[Link_omega]

her hand is outa place or position I should say. it appears that her breast is just in the right place.
Hmm...
Due to the placement of the doctors arm. I recommend turning her head to the slightly to the right perspectively speaking so that she appears that she turns with her body be carefull when drawing the lower portion of his body so that he doesnt appear pass through his body. The suction cups on her back should be turned in alignment to the back of her back. Personally they look as if the touching her but are not on her. His forarm is slightly too short and flow well with the elbow but should be good enough in this current pic.