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Totally member
Member # Joined: 17 Jun 2000 Posts: 280 Location: Laguna Niguel, Ca
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Member # Joined: 06 Apr 2002 Posts: 547 Location: DENVER COLORADO--rocky mountains whoo hoo!!
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Posted: Sun Jun 08, 2003 9:53 pm |
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good use of colors...and a good painty texture...looks kool to me except that either her head is too big for the body or the perspective is off on the chest and shoulders...good though _________________ www.andresguzman.com
---Would you believe me if i told you i was a liar?...
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Member # Joined: 23 Jun 2001 Posts: 2662 Location: Carbondale, CO
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Posted: Mon Jun 09, 2003 3:15 am |
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Nicely done... My only crit relates to the colors... the shaded and slightly shaded areas appear to be a bit muddy on my monitor, as if "darker" was just added rather than a real color for the darker area. I think that would be worth it to work on, 'cause the rest of the portrait is really nice.
...also, on my system the video just played as a blank screen. Probably a codec problem... _________________ HonePie.com
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Member # Joined: 17 Jun 2000 Posts: 280 Location: Laguna Niguel, Ca
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Posted: Mon Jun 09, 2003 6:54 am |
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eyewoo wrote: |
Nicely done... My only crit relates to the colors... the shaded and slightly shaded areas appear to be a bit muddy on my monitor, as if "darker" was just added rather than a real color for the darker area. I think that would be worth it to work on, 'cause the rest of the portrait is really nice.
...also, on my system the video just played as a blank screen. Probably a codec problem... |
make sure you have the latest version of realplayer installed
Oh, and darker most certain was not involved =P those are all brushstrokes of a standard bristle spray brush in painter.. perhaps my monitor is set too bright, or yours is set too dark... Perhaps I'll play around with it a bit more _________________ ---
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