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Fericon junior member
Member # Joined: 26 Jun 2004 Posts: 5 Location: GA
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Posted: Sun Sep 05, 2004 11:32 am |
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MetalSoul member
Member # Joined: 15 Nov 2001 Posts: 74 Location: Cambridge, MA - USA
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Posted: Sun Sep 05, 2004 1:26 pm |
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It's a nice sketch. The posture looks kind of awkward. His torso doesn't seem like it has an depth, because those things on his back look too close to his chest. The lower portion could be improved as well. _________________ "Remember, no matter how bad life gets, there's always beer..."
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CalicoRabbit junior member
Member # Joined: 04 Jul 2003 Posts: 21 Location: Depends
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Posted: Mon Sep 06, 2004 4:30 pm |
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As MetalSoul said, I think the pose needs work.
The zombie seems to lack focus, I can't figure out what he's thinking or doing, he seems to just be standing there. Try and have him doing somethinf specific.
Also, it seems as though some parts have shading/shadows while other parts that should, don't. For instance, the face has fairly dark shadowing while the pants have lighter shadowing and the hair has almost none at all.
I don't if you have, but I would try using construction lines/cubes to help me visualize the shapes of the body parts. I hesitate to add this because parts of it seems as though you have done this while others do not.
That seems a good place to start, hope I helped. Oh, also, I would lose the garlic, it is garlic right? I don't think that a creature like this, with the kind of firepower he has, would fool around with garlic.
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math member
Member # Joined: 07 Mar 2004 Posts: 254 Location: Gnarsemole
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Posted: Tue Sep 07, 2004 10:31 am |
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u cant kill vampires with firepower  _________________ quit pro quo |
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CalicoRabbit junior member
Member # Joined: 04 Jul 2003 Posts: 21 Location: Depends
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Posted: Tue Sep 07, 2004 10:38 am |
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silver bullets?  |
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