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gousman
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 10, 2004 5:03 pm     Reply with quote

Photoshop + Painter + Wacom
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Oxideyes
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PostPosted: Sat Sep 11, 2004 9:34 pm     Reply with quote
mmm, lighting.

Hope you don't mind the paint-over...just felt like a quick lighting job.


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PostPosted: Sat Sep 11, 2004 11:42 pm     Reply with quote
i like the gousman-version better. Is that a MV Agusta - Speedtriple something? Very Happy Looks cool. Give him a Streetfighterhelmet. Maybe looks more aggressive.
maybe add a hint of a street or so.

yours, Oxideyes, looks like more dirty cause of the black shadow working.
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 12, 2004 12:05 am     Reply with quote
Both images have a light direction issue. Where are the light above coming from? and if there are lights above the roads are not lit in anyway...I think that maybe the lighter/darker halfs should be worked as a background since it looks night on the ground et good be day on the top...also the headlight from the car (assuming) the light seems too thin so distance is not known to the viewer. i think you should rely more on motion blur on the background rather then your focus piece...check out some examples...but thats my 2 cents



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