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P-Rik
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 13, 2004 3:40 am     Reply with quote
Very Busy...
What do you think about it.
Does it need some changes about colours or elements for you?

Thanks Bye!


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PostPosted: Wed Oct 13, 2004 5:24 am     Reply with quote
hey P-rik, a very nice piece from you.

Since u asked about colors, I would implement more yellow in the atmosphere to balance out the purple clouds. Also some of the buildings feel they need more depth, they feel very foreground as it is.
Nevertheless, a really cool picture and I like it so the changes would be if I made something similar. I made a quick overpaint to show what I as rambling about and I overdid most of it, hope some of it helps.

have a nice day. Smile
keep it up

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PostPosted: Fri Oct 15, 2004 11:10 am     Reply with quote
Whoo Thanks Matthew !!
That yellow lighting make the picture deeper... But I don't know about yellow... perhaps just withe.

Anyway, that lighting is very different. I need to add more volume lighting!

Cheers!
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 16, 2004 2:02 am     Reply with quote
I like your concept. The colors are well choosed.
The perspective seems abit off here and there. I think you just have to work abit more on the clouds and backgorund. There's no real horizon.
Anyways, nice pic!!
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