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amichaels
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I've posted this a couple of other places, but without any real constructive criticism. I'm hoping to see more of that here.
Inked drawing colored in Painter.
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frantic
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| Posted: Sun Dec 12, 2004 11:33 am |
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very nice drawing...
there are a few things that bugs me;
His left leg (right for us) seems a little off, a little short compared to the left one..
The main thing that catches my eye is the linework-colorwork ..however both are ok to me, I think the use of them together bothers me a little.. the lines come out too much and colors cannot show their volume...'linework domination', I can call it that way I guess, wow cool word:) It is propably your style, but thats my opinion, just wanted to point it.
If you look to the eyes of that monster below, you can see what I mean...the lines are smoother and lighter/thinner, so the colors show themselfs better.. same case at those teeths...
There are also some depth issues I see... the coordination/angles between the gun holding hand and the monsters mouth seems a little strange/off..
thats propably the use of the colors volume and tones I guess...that image needs some more black areas, shadows on certain places...there are no black shadows at all. the background needs some work also...(but at those pictures bg can be left simple to make the main image the focus point.)
other than those little issues the image looks very nice... just work on the linework, colorwork harmonization...the results would be obvious.
keep up the good work!!!
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| Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2004 1:55 am |
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Anybody seen Flesh Gordon? Omg that was so fucking hilarious. I mean, remember that scene where they flew right through that ass-teroid belt?
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| Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2004 4:04 am |
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yeah I've seen flash... but I cant remember thats scene you mentioned...hmm, have to se again.. it is one epic movie man, really great.
flash gordon ist super, man... 
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amichaels
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| Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2004 11:30 am |
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| He's referring to porn, not the actual Flash Gordon movie. |
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| Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2004 12:19 pm |
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oh, got it...
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