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Disco_Science
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 2:52 am     Reply with quote
This is a water city i've been working. Does anyone have suggestions on how to push this further? I'm kinda stuck.

Thanks,
DS
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 04, 2007 12:54 pm     Reply with quote
Looks like a good start. Once you have blocked out all the main stuff, you can start making things more detailed. Adding highlights, more structure, etc. You must have some kind of mental picture of the final work, right? So go there and take a look.
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 04, 2007 4:08 pm     Reply with quote
Looks like it needs some depth.. The sky is looking too flat against the foreground, probably because it's so dark and because those vertical brushstrokes are distracting... I did a quick paintover to open the image up a little, it should explain what I mean..

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 3:14 pm     Reply with quote
Ah thanks Tinusch=), I see what you mean. The lighter sky helps alot.

I'm gonna lighten up the sky like you did, then im gonna try and add some more detail to the mid/forground and try and render the water=).
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