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Ivey
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 29, 2008 4:18 pm     Reply with quote
Help me finish this chick before I move on to the background. I welcome red lines.


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mattyuk
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PostPosted: Sat May 03, 2008 2:01 pm     Reply with quote
Her right foot is missing.
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patrick
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 25, 2008 12:39 pm     Reply with quote
overall nice, if your looking for "Red Lines"...
since she's looking slightly downward, more brow ridge definition, her nose is very wide, no lower eyelashes or definition, her upper arms are too long slightly and her right knee looks broken. I probably couldnt do much better, but you did ask for input.
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Aurelyx
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 7:32 am     Reply with quote
Her forearms are in a very uncomfortable position.

You're supinating them over a 90 degree angle which gives it a very uncomfortable look.
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Iceprism
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 14, 2008 9:01 am     Reply with quote
The nose seems very chiseled with your colors/values. I would try to soften that up and add more values.
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