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Pet
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 20, 2009 3:50 am     Reply with quote
Hello there ^^.

This my last finish work.
I will try to do more personal work.




Sometimes: problem corect


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PostPosted: Tue Jan 20, 2009 8:10 am     Reply with quote
link doesn't work?
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 21, 2009 8:28 am     Reply with quote
Another one

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 22, 2009 8:29 am     Reply with quote
wow it's really quiet in the forum nowadays, I like the edit in the second piece. There's something about the head though that takes away too much attention.
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 22, 2009 8:34 am     Reply with quote
hmm I need to work on my english, not take away rather Take up I mean. Or perhaps takes too much attention. Well I'll be damned, how the hell do you say that anyway? Hopefully you know what I mean.
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 22, 2009 2:52 pm     Reply with quote
Nice piece. My only 2 cents would be to develop the foreground elements a bit more (sticks in the sand, rock, that spinal thing up front) a bit more to give the entire piece a sense of completion.

Which could be what Sometimes was getting at. The fact that the head has a much more finished feel than some of the environmental elements.

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man. looking some more, that's moody as hell. i like i!
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 22, 2009 3:19 pm     Reply with quote
Last one is great. Works much better with the guy removed too.
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 22, 2009 3:48 pm     Reply with quote
lovley work. Jst loose the knights Smile Or at least on of 'em Very Happy
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 23, 2009 6:40 am     Reply with quote
Thanks all Very Happy

Another one

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 23, 2009 7:51 am     Reply with quote
See, now that's just plain creepy! Shocked
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 24, 2009 11:37 am     Reply with quote
it's the composition of the head that consumes attention, two ways to get around it. The head points outwards the picture, which makes focal point only to the head.
two quick overpaints since I got some time on my hands, nothing fancy.




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PostPosted: Sat Jan 24, 2009 1:33 pm     Reply with quote
Pet: I really like the creepy feeling you get of the Spider pic.

When it comes to the composition take a look at sometimes overpaints (especially the second one). Still great action in both drawings Smile

Keep it up!
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 25, 2009 1:48 am     Reply with quote
CarlE, yea I think you know what they say about golden ratio, the action is supposed to come back into the picture, right?
The first overpaint bends that, perhaps dragon in upper right if you wanna follow rules. who does?
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 03, 2009 6:51 am     Reply with quote
Thanks

Sometimes: I just wanted to keep the head in the top of the picture, over the watcher.

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 03, 2009 6:55 am     Reply with quote
very nice man Smile
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 03, 2009 10:15 am     Reply with quote
yeah u rock^^
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PostPosted: Sun May 24, 2009 12:44 am     Reply with quote
good ,nice ,great!!!and which tool did you used?ps?pt? 3d?
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 13, 2009 2:34 am     Reply with quote
Wow, great style overall. The only thing I would refine in the last one is the rein of the horse, just define it a little by making it more vivid and maybe less broad, right now it takes a little attention away from the rider and horse, like a gloria around the horses head.

Gj!!
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