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adamzhong
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 21, 2009 5:34 am     Reply with quote
hi i am chinease~and this is my work.
could you give me some suggestions?
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durgldeep
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 25, 2009 2:03 am     Reply with quote
Welcome!

First thought: maybe the forearm and head (lower right) should be a bit darker or higher contrast (spent a while 'reading' the image before I noticed them).

Second thought: with the light source the way it is (upper right) the lighting on the floor/background seems reversed, ie. should be more light on the floor behind the main figure (which would give it a bolder silhoutte and maybe no need to darken the arm/head?). It seems like light is falling on the throne, a bit less on the beheaded figure, then less again on the floor between there and the foreground figure. Unless there's a second light source somewhere in the background (falling on the throne)?

If the foreground guy is casting a shadow (on the floor), it would fall to the lower left and bottom (out of frame) of the image?

That's my (amateur) two cents. Smile
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adamzhong
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 27, 2009 8:20 am     Reply with quote
thank you,i agree with u.
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