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PostPosted: Sun Mar 15, 2009 6:09 pm     Reply with quote
Well, I'm stuck in a rut. I had a great beginning and when i started painting in stuff i lost it somewhere.. There's something very wrong with this whole thing...
I have a lot of problems with lightning as well...
So, any help, comments what ever would be very appreciated
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 04, 2009 3:53 pm     Reply with quote
Looks like the silhouette of that big, dark craft could use some space. The wall in the top right is touching just at the edge of the black silhouette, I think that makes it a bit confusing, with all the small details on the craft. If you opened up the top right corner of the image, I think it would work quite well.
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