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the-John-Doe
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 4:22 am     Reply with quote
Mean rampaging Firetoadsquads laying heavy suppressive fire 4 the Steeltroopers to advance..
'AT-43' Fanart



started quite messy in Paintchat finished in PS .. still kinda messy.
But hm .. perhaps someone likes it.
comments n crits welcome to consider for the maybe upcoming pieces.

greetz J.D
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 01, 2010 9:23 pm     Reply with quote
good art work. any more?
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 12, 2010 3:42 pm     Reply with quote
Looks good, but I would decide whether you're going for a lineart look or a painted one. It looks now like you're not sure whether you want the image to be photorealistically painted or colorized as in a printed comic.

Just my opinion.
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 29, 2010 8:06 am     Reply with quote
I initally agreed wholeheartedly with JS above, but the more I look the less I see to nitpick. I think this style works well. I'd grab some textured brushes and give this thing a little more grit and texture though - it feels a little too smooth and blurry in spots. I see some texture at the very bottom that I think could benefit the whole piece. Otherwise your composition and palette really clicks I think.
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the-John-Doe
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 13, 2010 7:23 am     Reply with quote
thank u guys for ur constructive comments.

@JSart; frankly, I didn't made up my mind that strictly .. but had no lineart nor coloured comic style in mind .. hmm dunno, maybe I don't see it.

@Tinusch; thnx 4 ur advise and yeah I would've done so too - but this piece's laying around for too long and is too crooked foremost in perpective related things .. that I don'tget myself spending more time at this ..
and thanks 4 ur words regarding composition and palette if I interpret ur term the right way Wink
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