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jue827
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 9:51 am     Reply with quote
Here's some of my stuff hope you like















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PostPosted: Wed Jun 09, 2010 1:54 am     Reply with quote
hi
very great art work. good post.
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 09, 2010 3:02 am     Reply with quote
You have nice ideas and a feel of color, but you should use harder brushes. It's very blurry Confused
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 10, 2010 6:00 pm     Reply with quote
thanks for the feedback guys
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 11, 2010 5:49 am     Reply with quote
Wow !
this is really cool !
I think you should lessen the blurry effect.
It's kinda blurry for me.
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 12, 2010 3:40 pm     Reply with quote
Au contraire, I *like* the blurry look. It's used locally - in spots - not universally, and it adds a lot to the atmosphere.
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 29, 2010 8:10 am     Reply with quote
These all have an incredible sense of atmosphere. Very dramatic. I can almost hear these pieces. It's hampered by the "blurriness" mentioned above I think - maybe moreso a lack of confidence in your brushwork. I see a bit of smudginess and soft-brush noodling. You could use some hard edges and strategic spots of texture to balance the blurriness, otherwise while these are very vibrant and moody pieces they don't really engage me.
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