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rockstar30
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 Posted: Thu Feb 03, 2011 2:22 pm |
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Please help with suggestions to improve this painting... I have been painting it all in one single layer. I have almost finished it but something doesnt quite work in this... can you please figure it out 
Ohthatballoonwip copy by smritirocks, on Flickr
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Tomasis
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| Posted: Fri Feb 04, 2011 10:22 am |
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nice pic. it makes me feel good.
i made a comment in another thread.
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rockstar30
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| Posted: Fri Feb 04, 2011 5:09 pm |
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Hi thanks a ton... I happy you liked it...as i said I have been having some issues with getting my values so I made this painting once again
this time I used a landscape pic as a reference for color and light... and I got this ...still not perfect but now it looks slightly better ...
RedBalloon copy by smritirocks
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Tomasis
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| Posted: Sun Feb 06, 2011 5:01 am |
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yup it looks good.
i still like the first pic due plenty of greenness,. I think i will make an speedpainting based on that inspiration 
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Quintus Dias
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| Posted: Wed Feb 09, 2011 12:05 pm |
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It's the scale.
To make a piece with depth you gotta bend it more than what it is in reality, maybe the trees are pretty big in the reference you used but with 2d painting you do want to get some kind of illusion..... Well, that's what I would call it I guess. lol.
I really think you are doing fine here though, the most important is to keep trying and to keep changing your subject which you are doing here, this will teach you the most I believe.
To get back to your piece, it's also the scale of the balloon. Either you wanna have the balloon as a background feature, or something that is in the foreground which in that case would make the balloon bigger and detailed.
Keep up the good work.
I made a quick couple of minutes overpaint....
P.s, I am hosting the overpaint on my site so I might take it down later..... |
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| Posted: Thu Oct 18, 2012 11:44 am |
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| increase the depth by blending distance objects into the atmosphere |
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