[yoszi]

Sorry for the repetition, can someone send me some scans from kronovecta ?





[This message has been edited by yoszi (edited August 18, 2000).]

[Francis]

Hey yoszi, I think you're improving. The ship sketch is pretty good - it has a more dynamic perspective than your previous ones, and the forms are more sophisticated, too.

I think you could probably refine the detailing a little bit. Not cover it in greeblies, but try to indicate some sense of scale or purpose for some of the parts. For instance, it's hard to tell how big the ship is - is it a single person thing (the dark triangular shape in the upper left corner almost looks like a seat or cockpit) or a giant star destroyer kinda ship?

In general, concept drawings should be pretty clear - you're trying to communicate an idea, so it's better if there are no ambiguities about the form or size/scale.

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Francis Tsai
TeamGT Studios

[MaLoRuM]

yea i agree wit Francis's post on the first one.

On the second picture i like the idea, reminds me of something from the never-ending story for some reason. The advice i'd give tho on that second picture is the right eye looks a little high up on the face, maybe lowering it slightly might make it a little more anatomically correct. As well as that circlet or ribbon around the head, to me it looks as if you were trying to align it with the center of the face. But from my vantage point it looks as if the face is slightly tilted and turned to the left, in which case the circlet or ribbon or whatever you wanna call it would also be slightly to the left and in line with the nose.... but this is just my observation...

[yoszi]

Francis, improving - heh, that's a relieve.. Thanks for the suggestions. I'm going to enlarge the drawing, it's pretty small, and redraw the areas that are not too clear.

Malorum, I didn't notice that thanks.

here's another one, i should probably draw legs somewhere there, I screwed up.