[minister]

Sorry I havent posted in a while and I made an error with the link! Anyways it's my 1st digi art in about 4 months took about 2 hrs in adobe.

[img] http://hed.gamesquad.net/rob/rosefinished.jpg
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Tell me what you think

-Rob "minister" Hemphill
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[Tinusch]

That's nice. Very nice. Maybe the paper could be a bit more wrinkled and tattered, though. And some of the burns should probably be sharper, it might look for realistic that way. The font is very recognizable, one which most computers probably have, so it kind of takes away from the effect. And the pen... Is that a modern ink pen? Heh, kind of clashes with the old antique feel of the rest of the pic. But still, that's a really nice pic as is. The things I mentioned were just suggestions as to how I think it could be made better, though.

You can edit your posts, so you could've just edited the link instead of making a new thread.

Also, the image tag can't have ANY spaces AT ALL in it, or it won't work.

[above]

Nice Pic! minister and welcome back, this is fragged from #etg I think you should add a few highlights to the rose and pen. That's all I can think of right now, keep drawing.