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Topic : "second pic in this forum! critics wanted!" |
nt member
Member # Joined: 24 Jul 2000 Posts: 73 Location: Finland
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Posted: Thu Nov 02, 2000 8:43 am |
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Hey I'd like to know your opinion about this pic... it's my school "work".
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nt member
Member # Joined: 24 Jul 2000 Posts: 73 Location: Finland
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Posted: Thu Nov 02, 2000 10:41 am |
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Hey guy's let me know what u think!!!!!!!!
Cheers mates! |
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Flexible Elf member
Member # Joined: 01 Aug 2000 Posts: 642 Location: Parker, CO
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Posted: Fri Nov 03, 2000 12:34 am |
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It looks a little underdeveloped.. you should try out a solid color or black background for the action panels (or just a background of some kind) and the word panels should be a little easier to read. The panel with the fist should be your most active one.. but it looks like it's the least developed. Hope that helps ya. Sorry if it sounds harsh (not intended) I just thought I'd put my 2 cents in there.
-Flexible Elf
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