[Chris Noeth]

This has nothing to do with the movie!



Comments welcome!

Best,

Chris
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[Joe84]

apart from anatomy proportions, theres a few things that bother me. that is: the hot pink lipstick. it looks so unnatural and cartoony. Her hair looks more like a wild shrub than a head of hair. Overall she looks flat? because the way shes rendered, all the values and color intensity is the same everywhere on her body. her back arm should be different to her most closest arm to the viewer. likewise i would apply this to her hair, dress and legs.

also i dont know if this was intentional, but there are no eye pupils. adding even just an indication of a pupil will help add appeal to her face

i would also stay away from using similar hand shapes. her back hand, i feel should be a different shape. maybe a clenched fist would be preferable. at the moment her hands look so stiff and unappealing as they appear to be like rakes.