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Hurri-cane
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 26, 2000 6:04 pm     Reply with quote
i did this sketch/doodle today when i was talking with a friend of mine.


if you want the full size version click here http://hurricane.xtremenn.com/temp/Lineart.jpg ---
feel free to color it if ya want.

.caneman
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 26, 2000 6:10 pm     Reply with quote
I like it! I like the different weights in the lines. Kinda reminds me of some of the concept art over at Capcom.

The only things that pop out to me as maybe needing some refinement are the hands of both characters. The wrist on what would be the woman's left hand seems to have the wrist bone's slight portrusion a lil out of place. Right now it appears in the center of the wrist where it should be on the side. Other than refining forms on the hands and fingers, I really like it. Hope it helps. Laterz.


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PostPosted: Tue Dec 26, 2000 7:39 pm     Reply with quote
HURRRRRR!!!!!!!!!

Damn nice... Might color it when i get back later tonight!

Lubberly!

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PostPosted: Tue Dec 26, 2000 11:02 pm     Reply with quote
you already know what i think H. ill post here when im done with it.
WICKED



this is as far as im going to color this one sorry but i got alot of stuff to work on. I had to crop it down to 55% cause geocities is uploading slow today. Some of the shading is harder to see now.

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anticz
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 27, 2000 12:05 am     Reply with quote
Hurri-cane,
Nice pic! I like the line work and appeal of this but, anatomy wise there's posibly a couple funky areas. The head is a little small. To me this feels more like a stylistic choice rather than a mistake. I like it and I'd leave this alone. The neck is kinda long (again, I think you did this on purpose and it looks cool, very exaggerated but, in a good way). The left shoulder of the girl might need to be trimmed down a little. Kinda looks like she's got something growing in there. I'd also maybe work on the breasts a little. They look a little lop sided. And finally, her right hand looks much more massive than the left. Over all, a great piece. I'll be checkin your posts more often from now on . I'd love to see a colored version of this. Very kick ass work. Hope none of this came across badly .

P.S. Is that Bjork I see on the arm band?


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Hurri-cane
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 27, 2000 3:21 am     Reply with quote
OPTX: yea, i know the hands are funky, but as ive written before this is a sketch/doodle, i should redraw the hands. but.

Jenn: how's it going ? looking forward to see the colored version of yours.

WICKED:

anticz: i totally agree with u on the shoulder thing, i noticed it the second i inked the line. no, it doesnt say 'bjork' it says 'bjorn' my name.
thanks !


Thank you all for replying, and giving a F*CK.

[edit: added some more comments and stuff]
.caneman

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Binke
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 27, 2000 10:12 am     Reply with quote
Heh,cool hurri. Her neck looks a little bit too long though. Is her torso naked, or is that a very transparent shirt?
o tack för att du köpte ut hehe.


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PostPosted: Wed Dec 27, 2000 10:16 am     Reply with quote
hahahahahhahah!!!!! the little guy reminds me of the little Wimpy character from the popeye cartoons.....

awesome work!

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PostPosted: Wed Dec 27, 2000 1:13 pm     Reply with quote
Look at it : I've made this inking with your pic.... tell me what you think about it :o)
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 28, 2000 1:22 pm     Reply with quote
I think it looks cool!
There are some things that maybe could be improved.

The neck looks too long and is too thick.
The upper body is a little bit skewed to the
right(our right) You've also suggested that she is muscular, but the ribs are suggesting that she is very skinny, You could maybe tone it down. The right hand is smaller than the right and looks dead in a way if compared to the left.
Since you've gone so far with doing the legs, are you gonna do the feet too? It'll add weight to it all. The fingers(on all hands) make them look like they have the same length, maybe it's just me...
Looks good
-Mikael



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PostPosted: Thu Dec 28, 2000 1:23 pm     Reply with quote
Looks slick, cane. The little man so strongly reminds me of something.... weird.



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Hurri-cane
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 29, 2000 12:58 am     Reply with quote
binke:

mattready: hehe, i like the little fat dude...im thinking of doing him seperatly.
more to come

mab: looking good, still missing something...maybe the uneaven coloring or something, i dont know.


im gonna post my coloring job on this one too. as soon as i can

thanks for the replyes.


.caneman

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