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EviLToYLeT
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 27, 2000 11:56 am     Reply with quote
Doh. Never got around to finishing my old santa, which many of you may have seen. Just finished it this morning and heh, I like it Was experimenting with some light and everything but I think i did it wrong. Anyway, please crit.


[edit] Yah i know it's a little late....but hey, who wants Christmas to end?! [/edit]

[This message has been edited by EviLToYLeT (edited December 27, 2000).]
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Superbug
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 27, 2000 2:54 pm     Reply with quote
U know...i thought his finger was a ciggerette. really!

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PostPosted: Wed Dec 27, 2000 10:10 pm     Reply with quote
same, or is he just pikin hnis nose

cool pic

Ilike it

keep them comming..
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EviLToYLeT
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 28, 2000 8:09 am     Reply with quote
He's going Shhhhhhhhhh........ you you....... wierdos.
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El Caseron
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 28, 2000 8:35 am     Reply with quote
Hey, quite good. But the pose doesn't look santa-like. I dunno why... but I guess he'd never sit like that. Santa never sits anyway.
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EviLToYLeT
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 28, 2000 7:40 pm     Reply with quote
Thanks for the reply guys. Back to the shop I guess...

Anyway.. I guess my attempt for the fire lighting didn't go to well. I did notice that he had no folds in his clothing.. still working on how to get folds in. And anyway, thanks everyone.
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 29, 2000 12:57 am     Reply with quote
Hi evil, Overall i like the picture and i think it has great potential. I have some
suggestions on how to maybe make the pic look more solid.

It looks like the glasses melts or something.
Try to draw up a couple of help-lines in order to correct them. I like the pose on the upper body, but i have problems seeing if he's sitting or levitating over the floor
or if he is sitting on something. If he is sitting on the floor or on something else there should be a shadow casted by his legs.
Also the legs are too cylindrical with no wrinkles on the clothing.
It's very messy were he holds his finger.
It melts in totally with the beard and if you squint with your eyes while looking at the picture it looks like the whole arm is missing. It also actually look like he is picking his nose. You can change that by moving the position to the
left or right or down. I would also suggest more fleshier skin tones. More pink, red etc.
It's a little bit too orange at the moment.
Try to study fire too, it could be more brighter, maybe you could check out Pierre's
knight-thread were you see the knight ride through the fire.

Hope this can help you some
-Mikael

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