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Wyatt Turner
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 29, 2000 10:51 pm     Reply with quote
what do you think of my new piece, GLASS Forest.

would like some crit, this is one of my new WACOM images.

and loving every bit of it.



thanks guy's


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The Postman
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 29, 2000 11:32 pm     Reply with quote
Hmm, I like the overall color scheme, but the lines are all jaggedy, any way to fix that and it would look tons better

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Freddio
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 29, 2000 11:57 pm     Reply with quote
nice but get rid of that

signature...

yuky

it could be worse

comic sans argh..
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Wyatt Turner
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 30, 2000 12:16 am     Reply with quote
sig, What ever...

thanks for your input



just messing with differnt ideas, since I'm new to digital painting, I could space out for hours and not even know it. like last night, it ran into the morning.
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waylon
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 30, 2000 12:26 am     Reply with quote
Hi. I really like the second one. Very nice composition, and it has a great warm color scheme.

I tend to agree with Freddio about the signature, though. It really stands out, and tends to detract from the picture - it's like a giant magnet drawing your eye to the bottom-right corner of the pic. The second one is much better, but it would be better yet if you picked up your tablet and SIGNED it.

Though I suppose, all things considered, it's really a minor detail.
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Wyatt Turner
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 30, 2000 12:32 am     Reply with quote
thanks waylon, I'll try and make a simple sig. I opened my eyes for a moment. back to what I was doing

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