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opticillusion
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 8:09 pm     Reply with quote
What was a quickie ended up to be something I keep going in for changes...so any help or suggestions on this would be much obliged.

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 8:21 pm     Reply with quote
i really like the bg, but the character itself doesn't look rendered well enough, looks more like a big shape than a person.. I like the lil green light though..

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 8:52 pm     Reply with quote
i like this alot. Giants?

maybe if you put some reflected light from the cayon wall bouncing off his middle torso might help.. But i also like it how it is... great colors and mood.

n8x

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 03, 2001 12:28 am     Reply with quote
this is nice. it made me feel very relaxed.. nice colors.
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 03, 2001 1:23 am     Reply with quote
Really nice colours and you are creating a nice atmosphere. The main problem that I see is that I don't get a good sense of the character, what they are doing (other than siting). It looks like you have some interesting ideas going on but you just can't make them out.
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 03, 2001 2:38 pm     Reply with quote
opticillusion: I like this pic alot, it has a really ambient quality to it.

Great stuff!



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PostPosted: Wed Jan 03, 2001 8:10 pm     Reply with quote
Bubonic > Good point, I'm working on giving the backpack and clothes more form, and lightening up the shadows a bit.

NBX > hmmm. You see a giant eh? Will try to add something to the background to scale him down a bit then

Icannon > thanks

Matt > Another good point. I'm working on a vertical shot as well, having another masked climber above him...otherwise, there is a bit of a storyline to this shot, which I'll get posted when it's done.

I'll try and get an update up tomorrow. Thanks for the comments!
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 04, 2001 12:36 am     Reply with quote
Sorry, i ment that it looks like one of the Mechs out of the Giants game. sorry for the confusion, i think the scale is just fine.

N8x
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