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Bradford
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 04, 2001 2:42 am     Reply with quote
this was done in about 20 minutes or so. i am looking for major critiques from anyone. i know there are a lot of problems.





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PostPosted: Thu Jan 04, 2001 7:59 am     Reply with quote
This may have been intentional but damn man, his forearms are huge. With forearms that big, you wonder how much the guy masturbates every day

I kind of like the smallish head (Don't know if it was intentional, to enhance the arm size but I kind of like it).

The other thing (which I am trying to work on), is that you should try to not draw everything from a perfect front or profile view, especially faces. It really detracts, in my opinion, from the overall image because drawing a face from front or profile is fairly elementary, and doesn't really show much in the way of skills.

Also, (I could be wrong on this one), his ear seems a little low.

But all in all, I enjoyed it.
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 04, 2001 10:25 am     Reply with quote
thanks for the reply. i can see what you mean by the arms. i need to draw them smaller damn. your right about the face angle and ears too. hmm more practice ahoy.

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EviLToYLeT
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 04, 2001 10:54 pm     Reply with quote
The arms are indeed too big. But.. looks pretty cool. If you want big arms to make him look well-builty and super buff, make sure to beef up his body and neck as well to keep everything in porportion. Otherwise just tone down the arms a tad bit.
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 05, 2001 12:14 am     Reply with quote
I wont even ask what the firing mechanism is for that handgun
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