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Author   Topic : "First-time Coloring *Check It!*"
twisted
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 23, 2001 3:47 am     Reply with quote
Well, this is the first time I've tried to color something from off of here... and the first time I've posted any work on here, so what do you think so far? I got this line art from Rattmouth and I thought I'd give coloring a try. Crits are welcome.





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PostPosted: Tue Jan 23, 2001 3:56 am     Reply with quote
looks good so far - something's wrong with the left cheek - I'm just not sure what it is.
You should work a bit more on the face's contrast.
The hair looks great, but you should smudge that spot between the ribbon in her hair and the shoulder a little bit more...

looking forward to the finished piece.

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 23, 2001 5:39 am     Reply with quote
Nice! Alot better then my first coloring anyway.
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 23, 2001 8:35 am     Reply with quote
Where's your lightsource?

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 23, 2001 8:41 am     Reply with quote
I guess the cheek needs some stronger shadows

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