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Lajun
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 1:10 pm     Reply with quote
-- a really quick one. I was bored. Used an old 3d concept I made .. modified it some and painted some flames to it. And a basic background.

Enjoy..

Edit: had to change the location.. it was REALLY slow on loading before as you mentioned.




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[This message has been edited by Lajun (edited January 04, 2001).]
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nightmare
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 1:21 pm     Reply with quote
its pretty i like it

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 1:44 pm     Reply with quote
Nice.. It seemed to load slow for me. I have high speed internet here. :-/ still it could just be some traffic on the net today.

Nice model.. what did you model in?

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Lajun
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 2:31 pm     Reply with quote
thnx.. It's made in a prog called Cinema 4D XL..by Maxon

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 03, 2001 1:34 am     Reply with quote
Looks like a good start...the first things I see are...

1. tires...seems like you've made them black, I can't see them at all...play with the material/texture make it more like rubber

2. The logo/chrome trim letter is too thick, try lessening the extrude.

3. Look at the rims and try and blend the shapes into one another a bit more

4. The seams in the body...you should really be able to see the thickness here it will make a huge difference...there should be a dark line where the split occurs and then a bright highlight right next to it.

5. Put a gravel texture on the road...again not pure black...

As an aside...the flames are interesting...kinda "ghosted", I prefer the more graphic outline look, but these are cool in a different way.

Hope this helps a bit...

-nate
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