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bdmf
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 09, 2001 10:18 pm     Reply with quote
hi all...this is a painting i did today...i know that i got some of the colors and perspective off...but it was fun painting it....please comment ..and help me.!

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 10, 2001 5:42 am     Reply with quote
I can feel the wind!

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 10, 2001 10:27 am     Reply with quote
well I guess the perspective is slightly off with the tree thingy on the left.. but overall I relaly like this pick of yours.. do some more...

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bdmf
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 11, 2001 9:33 am     Reply with quote
thanks for the replies.....is there anything esle that you see wrong with it.....it would relly help if you could give some pointers
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 11, 2001 10:38 am     Reply with quote
thats hot, only thing i would say is to tighten up those rocks

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 11, 2001 10:40 am     Reply with quote
a tree? I think that's a cliff but I dunno.

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2001 12:01 am     Reply with quote
This is nice stuff..

I would clean it up first and foremost. And for sure add more foam. Not just around the rocks, but also on the surface in the background.
Keep going!



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bdmf
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2001 12:17 am     Reply with quote
thanks for the replies....

yeah...your right syng...its a rock or cliff ...not a tree...

danny...i dont think that im going to tighten it....i was trying to get a feel for painting an outside scene.....as you can tell i dont know anything about painting rocks....i need more practice... but this is my first outside painting...

thanks again...for your crits
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