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Cos
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PostPosted: Wed May 16, 2001 6:05 pm     Reply with quote
don't really like this much, but other people did soo you can decide

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PostPosted: Wed May 16, 2001 6:31 pm     Reply with quote
Not bad. She kind of reminds me of Angie Everheart.
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PostPosted: Wed May 16, 2001 7:51 pm     Reply with quote
I think what I like most about this image is the color use. The facial features are perhaps a bit unusual but then I have a very hard time depicting females with any amount of beauty so it's hard for me to offer advice. Perhaps (as I should do) just paint a thousand of them.
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PostPosted: Thu May 17, 2001 2:26 am     Reply with quote
looks like she hasn't showered in years (calling by her hair that looks too bulcky in my opinion) and the body lacks shape but the face and neck are good and the tones are good too.cheerz
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Enayla
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PostPosted: Thu May 17, 2001 2:35 am     Reply with quote
I like it =) I really like her skin tones and the look in her eyes.

The clothes are a bit bulky, but who's to say that women wear snug outfits all the time?

If I'm to offer any crits on this, it's that her mouth's a bit... swollen up on her left side. The upper lip is at another angle than the other side, and the bottom lip is quite a lot wider than the right side lip.

Well. That said, people very rarely have completely symmetric faces, so this might well have been your intention. And even if it wasn't - it still looks good. This is just me nitpicking =)

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PostPosted: Thu May 17, 2001 5:03 am     Reply with quote
Hey Cos, I like the colors and overall execution. The hair could use some fine tuning, have some shinier highlights or something... anyway I think it's good looking pic.

-Ville

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Cos
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PostPosted: Thu May 17, 2001 1:41 pm     Reply with quote
Spooky - well I never heard of her but I looked her up on the net and
I guess yeah, something does look like her. The big arnie chin maybe hehe.

Thrush - Probably the best advice really, the colours is what I was fairly
happy with.

Topeira - Thanks, hasn't washed for weeks lol, I like that. I'll keep that
excuse in mind

Enayla - thanks =) I'm happy you liked it. I just look at it it and
somthing I hate, I'll look over the crits you mentioned and see if I can
make any difference.

Rhomb - Thanks man =) Yeah the hair does look abit solid. I didn't want to
over work it which is why I didn't go for too much detail with the hair, then
other areas just got too worked so its just looking an unfinished mess now.
Maybe I'll have a go at reworking it and see how salvagable it is.
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kos.mandis
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PostPosted: Fri May 18, 2001 10:31 am     Reply with quote
Hey punk, who did u get that from?
Heh, well I believe that the head has a wrong perspective. The way the hair+skull look is as if she is looking toward us and on the right, but her face is looking straight towards us. So in that case, it would be easier to fix the hair in a "front" pose. Or at least that's my opinion

Good variation from what you're doing, keep up experimenting! (just in drawings dude )
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Speve-o-matic
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PostPosted: Fri May 18, 2001 12:27 pm     Reply with quote
The diagonal composition is rather disorientating, especially for a traditional portrait. I don't think it works very well. I preferred the image far more after I rotated it in Photoshop. Here is a little repaint I did.



Just an idea.

- Steve

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PostPosted: Fri May 18, 2001 11:09 pm     Reply with quote
who is he?
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