View previous topic :: View next topic |
Author |
Topic : "Self Portrait" |
Totally member
Member # Joined: 17 Jun 2000 Posts: 280 Location: Laguna Niguel, Ca
|
|
Back to top |
|
Vesuvius member
Member # Joined: 13 Jan 2001 Posts: 718 Location: Newton, Ma, USA
|
Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2001 4:05 am |
|
 |
this deserves a response, it's pretty damn good, though I'm not sure of the perspective on the chin (it may just be me though), I also think that while the skin may be shaded and colored well, the next step will be for you to try to show skin texture deviation and any scars/hair/etc. that will add age and realism. very good one, definitley above average, keep it up! |
|
Back to top |
|
Frosted Flame member
Member # Joined: 01 Jun 2001 Posts: 232 Location: Ontario
|
Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2001 6:43 am |
|
 |
I agree with Vesuvius in that the chin is slightly "off". I also agree with Vesuvius in that this is a very nice portrait.
My only suggestion would be to use some harder strokes. Me a little more aggressive with your brush work, it sort of looks a little smudgey right now. The colours are great, and the values are well chosen - I just want to see some harder edges.
Take it easy, |
|
Back to top |
|
Totally member
Member # Joined: 17 Jun 2000 Posts: 280 Location: Laguna Niguel, Ca
|
Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2001 9:45 am |
|
 |
to be quite honest with you, I have a wee bit of a crooked chin =\ |
|
Back to top |
|
|