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neff · Posted: Mon Mar 03, 2003 10:14 am

Couldnt post it into the Speedpainting Threat because an error Wink

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Hunago · Posted: Mon Mar 03, 2003 11:51 pm

Nice character! I like your inks and coloring style. Smile

think some shadow at her foot could root her to the picture more, and lower edges of her hair stood out slightly for me, think thinner lines or some light from below could be good.

Dunno if you want crits, sorry if I was presumptious.

Xyster21 · Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2003 12:20 am

Nice pic.
Just like Hunago said... you just have to ground her a little more to the ground with shadow :p
Only other comment is maybe her facial anat. is iffy but its a cartoon Razz

so what the hell ? hehe
GJ on her. I think it looks really nice.
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IDrawGirls · Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2003 12:33 am

Wow NeFF you are improving! Smile

Did you work on color theory lately? Colors and anatomy are good IMO.
I like the face.

neff · Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2003 7:58 am

Thank you all Rolling Eyes

Yepp, the face is still a problem of me, but i think i get better in colorizing Smile

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neff · Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2003 8:49 am

mmh, dont like to open new threats Wink

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gezstar · Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2003 5:08 pm

hi. nice colours on the first one, though I think the background could do with some more attention. I think the second one could be really nice, but maybe you could be more selective with your focus/areas of detail. As it is, I think the eye doesn't really have anywhere to rest.