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jasonN · Posted: Sun Jun 15, 2003 12:07 am

The forum is really fast now, which is great to see Shocked

Anyway, I did this pic today for a uni assignment, it's due on wednesday and I still have other pics to draw for it so I had to leave it as is since I'm so pushed for time. I kinda like the sketchy style though. My own self crit is that the axe details are kinda tacky and underdone. They're also way too bright. If only I had more time! Anyway, crits are welcome.

EDIT:
I posted another pic further down.

n8 · Posted: Sun Jun 15, 2003 5:55 am

dood..when did u get so good?..
the proportions however...look a little off..that could be coz of the armour tho?..
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Matthew · Posted: Mon Jun 16, 2003 6:05 am

Weird am I the only one that couldn�t enter the forum until now....hmm.

Anyway, Yea I really like the sketchy look of paintings too and yours is looking really good, only one crit and that is the arms looks a little bit stiff and un-controlled, not a biggy thou.
Great light in the scene. :)

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CwStone · Posted: Mon Jun 16, 2003 9:06 am

yea mat i wasnt able to get on for a while either.

jason this is awesome...not much else to say tho since all other crits have already been said.
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jasonN · Posted: Fri Jun 20, 2003 5:43 pm

Hi n8 thanks for your crit, yeah you're right I'm pretty sure the proportions are off, I gotta work on that!

Matt: Ok thanks for your reply Smile

You're right about the arms. I have a big problem in that whenever I paint a sketch, I can't keep the energy of the sketch in there and the painting ends up being stiff.

Thanks CWstone, I appreciate it Smile

Here's another pic I did for the same project, but as you can see, I didn't have enough time to finish so the background is incomplete... I just hope my tutor doesn't mind... hehe

Serg · Posted: Sat Jun 21, 2003 4:18 am

The second work is my favourite, I especially like you did mood on the face and hands shapes. Good knight.
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nexflo · Posted: Sat Jun 21, 2003 4:49 am

great work...
like the style and coloring a lot
crits as said already slightly wrong props on the top character(arms wise).

Post the rest once ure outta stress Smile

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dr . bang · Posted: Sat Jun 21, 2003 5:15 am

Woah that some cool stuff man!!!! U improve so fast!
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