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gamerplus
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PostPosted: Mon May 31, 2004 8:53 pm     Reply with quote
this is some pictures i drew awhile ago.
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/5622610/
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/6191202/
um basically tell me whatcha think, what i need to change and how...thanks Very Happy
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Joe84
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 01, 2004 3:47 am     Reply with quote
nice work, but u need to brush up on female anatomy and perspective. In the 1st pic her body seems twisting in 2 different directions which makes her pose feel awkward. The 2nd pic, her head is sticking out too much from the neck. Move it in and centre it looks right.
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