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keyline
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PostPosted: Sun May 15, 2005 11:37 am     Reply with quote


Illustrator CS + Graphire, from scratch. Comments and critique are appreciated.
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jinnseng
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PostPosted: Mon May 16, 2005 4:17 pm     Reply with quote
It doesn't really look finished. It could really use some color or some shading to add some volume.
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keyline
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PostPosted: Tue May 17, 2005 3:11 am     Reply with quote
jinnseng wrote:
It doesn't really look finished. It could really use some color or some shading to add some volume.


It supposed to be 'graphic', i.e. black & white, but may be you are right and there coud be some color, without shading, I think.
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Affected
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PostPosted: Tue May 17, 2005 11:28 am     Reply with quote
Your line weights are almost completely uniform, which doesn't really help make the shapes interesting.
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