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remic20
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 09, 2007 6:35 pm     Reply with quote

crit plz~~help me make it better
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Petri.J
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 11, 2007 2:03 pm     Reply with quote
Could you tell us what we are looking at?
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Tinusch
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 11, 2007 2:05 pm     Reply with quote
I can tell what it is, but it takes far too much effort to figure it out. Too dark overall, and the composition is too stiff. I'd bump up the contrast, and rework the composition - maybe extend the canvas in all directions.
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remic20
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 11, 2007 11:05 pm     Reply with quote
Petri.J - its called turtle ship. Korean naval ship similar to iron clad ship..
Tinusch - yeah I'll try to rework on composition and the contrast too
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remic20
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 11, 2007 11:11 pm     Reply with quote
hey tinusch..just a side question..your a student in rhode island..do you goto risd?
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 12, 2007 9:49 am     Reply with quote
No I don't, though I did apply out of high school and was accepted. I go to URI for communication studies and business.
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 12, 2007 6:28 pm     Reply with quote
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 12, 2007 6:30 pm     Reply with quote

source
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 18, 2007 11:32 am     Reply with quote
This one's much easier to read, but I miss the storminess and turbulence of the first color scheme... Maybe you can find a medium?
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