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choboroy
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 24, 2009 10:40 am     Reply with quote
This is a small idea I had, and thought I'd try and get some feedback before I try to finish it. Viewing size is meant to to be 20.5x20.5cm, so it's a tad smaller here than what it will be.

It has taken ages already, but I guess I'm at least proud that I didn't use any reference.

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choboroy
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 25, 2009 6:36 am     Reply with quote
Worked on it some more. Think I've gone too far.

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Joe84
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PostPosted: Sun May 03, 2009 11:07 pm     Reply with quote
nice stuff here choro, which uni do u study at in sydney?
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choboroy
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PostPosted: Tue May 05, 2009 6:06 am     Reply with quote
Thanks man. I do design at UTS right now, but was at SCA last year.



Don't wanna play with it any more ahah.
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PostPosted: Tue May 05, 2009 10:21 am     Reply with quote
Certainly very busy, but I kinda like it that way. I'm not sure what sort of compositional plan you had to begin with but it seems fairly arbitrary. This is probably why you have pushed the brush around a lot and added so much texture. It works pretty well, overall the piece is very interesting but it lacks a bit of focus. The main portrait is great, I like the face and overall tones. The other two are good, but the left one even though it has a nice feel with the dramatic lighting it feels a bit lost when you look at the torso. Nice colours, and really interesting textures overall.
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Joe84
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PostPosted: Wed May 06, 2009 10:37 am     Reply with quote
choboroy wrote:
Thanks man. I do design at UTS right now, but was at SCA last year.


thats cool that your doing some illustration, i cant say that its too big in Oz. Which is a shame. Its mostly graphic design at most.
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